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MORTAL ENGINES

October 9, 2015 / / 5 Comments

Reeve makes an effective character because there is two sides of him. he can be a terrifying monster or he can be a normal person.on the other hand he is so terrifying that he has green glowing eyes and razor-sharp claws. he also has scratch marks all over his face. he so ugly that he can even scare children. he has got so many wires connected to his face and body. I bet you he is the top scare in the whole of london. 

Reeve is made for assassinating  people. He is after Tom natworthy and Hester Shaw. Reeve  has to be a good character because his master tells him to.later on Hester tells shrike and reeve that they can’t be assasined so then shrike says that he doesn’t make the rules its his master (uknown) shrike makes up his decision and lets Tom live and only kills Hester Shaw. 

Then something happens just before Hester Shaw dies Tom distracts shrike and pushes him over and Tom says stop you can’t sacrifice your self for me we are both in this together I can’t lose a friend like you and you know that. You might be both loner but you still got a friend like me to talk to so choose just choose. Hester grabs toms hand and drags him out of there however Tom gets up and continues chasing Hester Shaw and Tom Natworthy.

Also, on the other hand Tom and Hester  find this big gigantic shield. This shield looks like a border of some kind. actually  it is a shield/border that splits the countryside and MountGuo. this place is so dark that they need lights to see through if anyone is coming to the border. there are dark horrible hot air balloons surrounding the shield/border. And finally just to end this essay I’m going to tell you one more interesting fact about this book (Mortal engines). did you know that mortal engines has a 15th anniversary? well if you knew that great but if you didn’t now you know.

Your sincerely

Alex Goncalves

 

STOP FIGHTING!!!

March 20, 2015 / / 6 Comments

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Dear Mr Dastigir,

My name is Alexander Goncalves. I am a year 7 student and I’m concerned about something extremely important. I have a concern about fighting in school. There have been a lot of fights around the school. I believe that all of these fights begin by pupils  insulting each other. They play around but then when they involve racism and family that’s when they take it as an insult. That’s how they start these fights

I think that people should just ignore the bad influences and  focus on what you have to do. If the teacher finds out that someone was distracting you there will be a consequence for their actions.

I also think that these things happen by other people spreading rumors around the school. Once everyone has heard it they respect the one who wins the cuss fights they know to respect them otherwise they will cuss you or fight you and seriously hurt you.

Most people think that people only do this to get attention so that they can be respected and so that  people can be more kind to them. most people start rap battles so they can see if they are actually bad or not.

if they are caught doing fighting or rap battles I think that they should be punished Because they are affecting them and people around you.This affects other people by younger children thinking it’s acceptable to say it in public and at home then they get into trouble they’re the only one which gets into trouble.

If you just ignore them it won’t be a problem.  if they keep causing a problem you should just tell the teacher a they will deal will it.

I know that you’ve done this in assembly before but people has been ignoring your advice. I think that you should take it more seriously and start giving out more punishments.

I think that if some someone had a fight. Then someone got hurt and told a teacher after you find out who it was. If they insist that it wasnt them they should check through CCTV cameras and find out if it was actually them.

I think that if pupils lie about it they should get an 1 hour detention after school. Just to make sure that they skip it the teacher should pick them up after the lesson.

For the people who just joined the school, you should tell them in assembly that you should not fight or insult other people in school other wise you into a leadership detention.

In order to persuade them you must come up with a good persuasive beginning middle and end.  if you ignore this advice it would possibly come in one ear and come out another ear.

we should just start being More mature and start being more responsible for our own actions. I think that you should listen to my advice because if someone has a fight and someone gets really hurt and their mum finds out it’s not his fault its your fault for not talking to them.

Your sincerely

Alexander Goncalves