Author: Alexander

STOP FIGHTING!!!

March 20, 2015 / / 6 Comments

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Dear Mr Dastigir,

My name is Alexander Goncalves. I am a year 7 student and I’m concerned about something extremely important. I have a concern about fighting in school. There have been a lot of fights around the school. I believe that all of these fights begin by pupils  insulting each other. They play around but then when they involve racism and family that’s when they take it as an insult. That’s how they start these fights

I think that people should just ignore the bad influences and  focus on what you have to do. If the teacher finds out that someone was distracting you there will be a consequence for their actions.

I also think that these things happen by other people spreading rumors around the school. Once everyone has heard it they respect the one who wins the cuss fights they know to respect them otherwise they will cuss you or fight you and seriously hurt you.

Most people think that people only do this to get attention so that they can be respected and so that  people can be more kind to them. most people start rap battles so they can see if they are actually bad or not.

if they are caught doing fighting or rap battles I think that they should be punished Because they are affecting them and people around you.This affects other people by younger children thinking it’s acceptable to say it in public and at home then they get into trouble they’re the only one which gets into trouble.

If you just ignore them it won’t be a problem.  if they keep causing a problem you should just tell the teacher a they will deal will it.

I know that you’ve done this in assembly before but people has been ignoring your advice. I think that you should take it more seriously and start giving out more punishments.

I think that if some someone had a fight. Then someone got hurt and told a teacher after you find out who it was. If they insist that it wasnt them they should check through CCTV cameras and find out if it was actually them.

I think that if pupils lie about it they should get an 1 hour detention after school. Just to make sure that they skip it the teacher should pick them up after the lesson.

For the people who just joined the school, you should tell them in assembly that you should not fight or insult other people in school other wise you into a leadership detention.

In order to persuade them you must come up with a good persuasive beginning middle and end.  if you ignore this advice it would possibly come in one ear and come out another ear.

we should just start being More mature and start being more responsible for our own actions. I think that you should listen to my advice because if someone has a fight and someone gets really hurt and their mum finds out it’s not his fault its your fault for not talking to them.

Your sincerely

Alexander Goncalves

How is the mood set in chapter1?

March 10, 2015 / / 1 Comment

II think the mood in chapter 1 is upsetting.I think this because in chapter it says, a sad city saddest of cities, a city so ruinously it had forgotten its name.Also another reason why I think the atmosphere is sad because later on in chapter 1 Haroun’s mum leaves Haroun and Rushdie at their house.

Rushdie gets furious and smashes all the clocks including Haroun clock. After Haroun’s gets angry and spits out “why tell story’s that isn’t true!”All of a sudden Rushdie takes Haroun to an adventure to the valley of K.

Another reason why the mood is sad is because on the first page it says that “depths of the city, beyond an old zone of ruined buildings that looked like broken hearts.Also some people call Rushdie a rude name which is called Shah of blah.

Notes

March 10, 2015 / / 1 Comment

keywords       Fareshading

warning given to the reader by the writer. An idea that develops later in the story.Genies and story water.

Haroun does not belive his father but we later find out thier  mum will come back.

 

rashid chapter summery

February 6, 2015 / / 1 Comment

Haroun wonders where rashid gets his ideas from.rashid says he gets it from an invisable tap.Harouns mum leaves at 11:00pm after rashid smashes all the clocks.next they go to the valley of k and they meet the bus driver Mr butt.

The imanganery friend

February 6, 2015 / / 1 Comment

One day there was a boy called James.he just enterd secondary school. He was a very nauty boy and a show off.but he did not have any friends or anyone yo talk to.but just then he had an brilliant idea!He started to a imagenary friend.So they both lived happily ever after.